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Sarah's Persuasive Essay

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Persuasive Essay

By: Sarah Faessal

 

 

 

I like to sleep. And I want to keep it that way. But school is keeping me from sleeping. School can keep you from doing a lot of things. But here, I want to talk about one of those problems. Should school have a later start time? Yes, it should. Because people will pay attention more in class, they will have a more positive outlook in class, ant when they get home they will have more time to do their millions of pages of homework instead of sleeping.

 

 

 

First of all its that people will pay attention more in class, because they are not tired all through school and are wanting to go home. Students get a bunch of homework, go home and sleep, wake up realizing that they slept for to long, and do not have enough time to do their homework, then later they are not able to sleep when its actually time and the cycle repeats. People will pay attention more because it is good for people to have enough sleep in their beds rather than on their desk at school.

 

 

 

Second of all its that people will have more of a positive outlook in class. Like in a cartoon when the main character is super cranky because they didn't have enough sleep. I bet even the teachers an the principle herself is even more tired than us students because they wake up even earlier than us.

 

 

 

Third of all, its that they will have time to do homework instead of sleeping. Student get A LOT of homework at school. There shouldn't be any of it. But that's not the topic here. Since we wake up super early for school, student are even more tired at school because we have to use our brains and do work. Honestly nobody want to do that. So like if we are doing a math test and its super hard, it strains our brains and makes us as tired as heck. So when students go home, most of us go and take a nap. Usually parents wake us before I gets too late. But what if you have sport practice to go to? Like lacrosse? That takes a really long time. So you won't have time, unless you do you do your millions of pages of homework into the night. Then you wake up without enough sleep and the cycle repeats.

 

 

 

Finally, the end. Should school have a later start time? Yes, it should. Do need to pay attention more in class? Yes, we should. Do we be nicer in school? Definitely. Do we need time to homework so we turn it in on time and get good grades? Obviously.  Because its better for people to get their sleep in their beds instead of on their desk.

 

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